tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6581277174023785317.post8544590231330791278..comments2024-03-28T07:20:26.335-04:00Comments on Carol Baldwin's Blog: BLUE WILLOW: A Book that Lillie and Kate Read-- Part II and Insight into RevisionCarol Baldwinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10444182118975929045noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6581277174023785317.post-51577824523022183242022-06-28T19:51:19.629-04:002022-06-28T19:51:19.629-04:00Thanks, Jess! I am trusting that you are right abo...Thanks, Jess! I am trusting that you are right about revision!Carol Baldwinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10444182118975929045noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6581277174023785317.post-1538289459561617962022-06-28T16:31:16.161-04:002022-06-28T16:31:16.161-04:00I have always thought Blue Willow was beautiful. S...I have always thought Blue Willow was beautiful. Sounds like your book is making progress! I love that another story helped you piece together more pieces of the editing puzzle. Interesting to learn about your revision process. It takes a lot of time, but is so worth it in the end. :) ~ JessDMShttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04202502753961748992noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6581277174023785317.post-56499682318214667242022-06-27T14:50:29.165-04:002022-06-27T14:50:29.165-04:00Very true, Greg!Very true, Greg!Carol Baldwinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10444182118975929045noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6581277174023785317.post-5765405403410733892022-06-27T11:14:28.645-04:002022-06-27T11:14:28.645-04:00Just when you think you're done... another ide...Just when you think you're done... another idea to strengthen your story arrives. Thanks for the insights into your revision process.Greg Pattridgehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05761872776035591138noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6581277174023785317.post-78227419071466203272022-06-27T10:22:52.348-04:002022-06-27T10:22:52.348-04:00Thanks, Jane! You will resonate with my Half-TRuth...Thanks, Jane! You will resonate with my Half-TRuths!Carol Baldwinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10444182118975929045noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6581277174023785317.post-1770731085203445112022-06-27T10:21:29.334-04:002022-06-27T10:21:29.334-04:00Thanks Rosie. You can look up the story online!Thanks Rosie. You can look up the story online!Carol Baldwinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10444182118975929045noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6581277174023785317.post-85832384212714420642022-06-27T10:09:11.846-04:002022-06-27T10:09:11.846-04:00Our grandmother collected Blue Willow, too. I'...Our grandmother collected Blue Willow, too. I'd love to hear more about the story behind it. <br />Great post. Thanks for sharing.<br />Rosie Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06653714105297079330noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6581277174023785317.post-34509330400750688892022-06-27T09:55:48.225-04:002022-06-27T09:55:48.225-04:00BLUE WILLOW by Doris Gates was one of my favorite ...BLUE WILLOW by Doris Gates was one of my favorite books as a kid. Our neighbors actually had Blue Willow china. Thanks for those memories AND for the good revision lesson--separate out the part you need to focus on and analyze it. Good work!Jane Heitman Healyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03584630141388764779noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6581277174023785317.post-19102261586462965832022-06-27T08:31:35.373-04:002022-06-27T08:31:35.373-04:00That's a good attitude, Natalie!That's a good attitude, Natalie!Carol Baldwinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10444182118975929045noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6581277174023785317.post-26090520890792069232022-06-27T08:30:21.936-04:002022-06-27T08:30:21.936-04:00Blue Willow is popular in Australia too, Valinora?...Blue Willow is popular in Australia too, Valinora? How cool!Carol Baldwinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10444182118975929045noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6581277174023785317.post-26033327127375046542022-06-27T08:11:08.661-04:002022-06-27T08:11:08.661-04:00What a great story! That blue china pattern is rea...What a great story! That blue china pattern is really familiar to me too! The book sounds like it's coming together nicely too :) Valinora Troyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01913513248981439103noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6581277174023785317.post-69057658902384053362022-06-27T06:50:29.818-04:002022-06-27T06:50:29.818-04:00That's great that you figured out how to fix t...That's great that you figured out how to fix the problem in your story. Yes, revisions can take a long time. I'm just about ready to start revising my current manuscript. I like revising more than writing the first draft, so I can't wait.Natalie Aguirrehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03756087804171246660noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6581277174023785317.post-67139034898891331482022-06-27T05:36:24.983-04:002022-06-27T05:36:24.983-04:00Thank you, Marci!Thank you, Marci!Carol Baldwinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10444182118975929045noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6581277174023785317.post-29118620132763497662022-06-26T23:23:08.281-04:002022-06-26T23:23:08.281-04:00What a beautiful & thorough post. Your book so...What a beautiful & thorough post. Your book sounds like it’ll be wonderful!! I look forward to reading it one day. Marcihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10840939228385691641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6581277174023785317.post-73703732467059466132022-06-25T22:32:08.095-04:002022-06-25T22:32:08.095-04:00The Blue Willow china is beautiful. We had some wh...The Blue Willow china is beautiful. We had some when I was young. I have no idea whatever happened to it. I'll be interested to see how this plays into your final story. Thanks for the post. Rosihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01294774973863802821noreply@blogger.com